This are the changes I need
There are a myriad of formatting mistakes here that make it difficult to read.
Format:
Description placement–page 1
Dialogue misplaced–page 1–the Lady line
Verb tense in action should be present not past
CAPS characters’ names in action sections
Introduce characters–i.e. the Dean
Why is your action and dialogue on the same line–see throughout your script for this and change it.
We cannot SEE what your characters are thinking or feeling in the action sections. These sections are for location description and character action.
Important:
I’m also gonna add the sample and also the written version of the script so you know what feelings to add on the script
I’m it’s long script but the work i need is less than one page
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