Fix the writing
– be clearer in this section about how Shawn was impacted by each influence
– include how each impact Shawn instead of talking about his mother
Try not to include the mother
Ex: if you think poverty led Shawn to experience high stress and and depression then say it directly
Don’t get into the mom here
Peer reviewed comments: (what needs fixing as well)
It is noticeable that the third influence was difficult to explain and backup because of there was less references, however I understood its idea.
The influence on the poverty and the coronavirus pandemic had a lot of explaining and I believe if it just uses the parts in which it connects how the study profs that what it is stating is true, it will be a stronger paper.
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