CONTENT: Hi! I need to edit a bit the content of the paper you have worked on. T

CONTENT: Hi! I need to edit a bit the content of the paper you have worked on. The theme is the same: the passage form Women subordination to Women emancipation in the US MOVIE INDUSTRY. Particularly, my research is going to focus on the American movie ‘Sex and the City’. The purpose is to show how the females’ role have been reestablished. In terms of sources, you can reuse the one you mentioned if appropriate or add simply use new ones.
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PREVIOUS PAPER INSTRUCTIONS (#433317207): For my project I want to analyze the passage form Women subordination to Women emancipation in US television. Particularly, my research is going to focus on the American sitcom ‘Sex and the City’. I want to develop my argument by using the theoretical approach of Post-feminist theories by Angela McRobbie and Fien Adriaens.
Those are general feedbacks that the professor gave on the previous work. I thought you can find it helpful.
Comments: First, I want to congratulate you on the depth of research you conducted. You found many diverse sources. One thing you should include, though, is the criticism that Sex in the City promotes consumerism and the status quo. More importantly, the main issue you need to work with is being clear about your definitions, timeframes, and to avoid over-generalizing. There are many sweeping claims about TV, media, and representation that are true, but not for everything. You need to be more precise about your time frames and when you are talking about history. Also, you seem to be mixing up film and TV. These are not the same thing, so you need to be clear about that. When you update this, I would focus on your definition of postfeminism in your theoretical framework. In your introduction of the final project you can give an overview of the TV show and background information. You can explore the history of stereotypes and patriarchy in the lit review but be more chronological or start with the wider issues and keep narrowing your focus. Finally, be clear by what you mean by subordinated woman.