Please use the current personal statement uploaded and make it sincere and worth

Please use the current personal statement uploaded and make it sincere and worthy of an admission essay. Please follow the general format and flow of the current source material uploaded.
Please draw upon my background as an immigrant and the difficult journey of being a non-native English speaker having to take challenging science courses (uploaded source will provide more background and detail). Please also include patient advocacy and my interest to serve the underrepresented patients.
Please make sure the essay is a full type-written page.