Direct articulation of the concepts falls off and much the work is operating on  an implicit level.  Draw out the concepts as you go, show how Plato is building his definitions.
Needs a clear, well-developed thesis to help guide your understanding of the concepts. Mention the concepts up front and show how Plato develops his ideas as you analyze the dialogue
You seem to remain on the surface of the lecture notes and outlines. I would like to see a deeper understanding of the dialogues as a whole.
I would like to see more direct analytic work on the concepts; lay out the concepts, show how Plato is adding layers to his definitions

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