I started my draft and my professor gave me feedback on it . All I need is for some sentences to be fix and to add 3 more
pages since I already wrote 5 . I am also providing the sources I still need one more . This is what my professor said about my draft :
“Interesting paper but it needs a little work. Quite a few of your sentences need revision. Others need clarification and support from sources. There were also some spelling and grammar issues. You also need one more source for your paper and the body of your paper needs to be between 8-9 pages. Finally, your paper was submitted a little late. Therefore your receive 42 out of 50 points for this first draft.
Best,
Maria Biskup
Link to my paper : https://yorkmailcuny-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/g/personal/nayaly_pineda_yorkmail_cuny_edu/EW7IkmOXhV9LssVnQALU-KABalI01W5qyuQBf6votsOXWQ?e=frTqgU
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